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Vision is the art of seeing the invisible

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" The life of the dead is set in the memory of the living "

I wanted to try something new, so my Art Trade with Yellwolf of her amazing Character Coraline ♥
This is my first Manip. X'D Doesn't look fine or good, but i really hope you like it Yellwolf!

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quaddles quaddles.deviantart.com/art/Bo…
ThePurpleYard-Stock thepurpleyard-stock.deviantart…
Lakela lakela.deviantart.com/art/2014…


Her Part:
Choke on a lie by Yellwolf
Image size
1590x2385px 6.33 MB
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Firstly; I would like to say that I adore this piece and hope not to offend you with anything I say. If you really were not looking for a critique, you may disregard anything written after this and continue on knowing I like the work. Now, let's jump on in!

As for pros, the picture seems to just work with itself. I love how well you merged the pictures together, and I also love the pictures you chose to merge! The shading under the wolf is incredibly nice, and the sprites all seem to have different and original qualities, making it more than a simple copy and paste picture!

As for the cons, although I liked the shading under the wolf, it's a tad dark. Along with that, the shading on the fur makes me confused as to where a specific light source is. To add on with my rant of lights, the sprites produce light on the wolf... But appear to effect nothing on the ground? The sprites produce such an intense light that it makes no sense that the ground is unaffected. Going on, there are certain places that it's obvious you just drew on, like the little tuft of fur on the right of the wolf's chest. Or the piercings on the ear. I recommend using a water coulour brush AROUND these spots you drew on, and try merging it better in with the wolf.

Those are ALL just recommendations, please keep in mind, I really do like your picture! It presents itself well, and is really just a cute concept. I hope to see more things like this from you!